i remember i was conflicted. i had a sensible life ironed out in front of me. i thought i was adulting, rejecting my past antics. we sat in the middle of the bus, not the front, not the back. u charmed me like my home city. but i had to be what you wanted from me, the goddess who rejected u. a sniper from a baltimore art school. evolution is the only promise i make to you.
The wildest beef record belonged to B.o.B, who dropped a track dissing Neil De Grass Tyson, for believing the earth was round. The Flat-Earth gang ain’t to be fucked with
I had such a time reading this. I loved following the character through a concept more than a singular plot. That's not easy to do! Really enjoyed in the beginning when you added in the Teyana Taylor video lol. More than anything I enjoyed the voice you chose to have for the narrator. It was so interesting how invested it seemed. It was like me watching a reality show pan out with one of my friends who gets it. Seeing how he interacted with women was also so nice. You never painted him as oNe Of ThE gOoD oNeS™, he was just a man being considerate at times, maybe not others, and living his life with a conscious approach. Appreciated seeing his mistakes, successes, excitement and raw emotions. Thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read more!
This is way better than most of the bullshit published on Substack.
Thank you bob boris, whoever you are!
i remember i was conflicted. i had a sensible life ironed out in front of me. i thought i was adulting, rejecting my past antics. we sat in the middle of the bus, not the front, not the back. u charmed me like my home city. but i had to be what you wanted from me, the goddess who rejected u. a sniper from a baltimore art school. evolution is the only promise i make to you.
yeah, well i told you i would make sure you never forgot me. How am I doing?
Beautiful and engrossing. But also.. provocative and searingly audacious? I cannot wait for BEEF, volume 2.
Thank you Rose.
Beautiful. And powerful. Thank you for sharing your writing with the world.
Thank you May.
Beautifully written and intense short story.
Thank you DWC. You are a great judge of stories.
Still laughing at this!
The wildest beef record belonged to B.o.B, who dropped a track dissing Neil De Grass Tyson, for believing the earth was round. The Flat-Earth gang ain’t to be fucked with
Thank you David. They tried to go to the edge of the world and B.o.B got thrown off the ledge.
not through all of this but it is so good omg
I feel like the young gangsta with the illest flows just discovered their OG. Yeah they some real ones left. We few and far between but we exist.
Did you ever finish? You just pretend to like me!
girlll this is what i need. sorry for taking so long. this is so good. the texture. ugh 😩
Thanks, my Alukah! I appreciate your attention. Good luck with all your writing and art shit.
WILL TONIGHT !!!!!!!)))
Thank you, my alukah.
okay i actually will tonight i am so sorry i went through it last night
I had such a time reading this. I loved following the character through a concept more than a singular plot. That's not easy to do! Really enjoyed in the beginning when you added in the Teyana Taylor video lol. More than anything I enjoyed the voice you chose to have for the narrator. It was so interesting how invested it seemed. It was like me watching a reality show pan out with one of my friends who gets it. Seeing how he interacted with women was also so nice. You never painted him as oNe Of ThE gOoD oNeS™, he was just a man being considerate at times, maybe not others, and living his life with a conscious approach. Appreciated seeing his mistakes, successes, excitement and raw emotions. Thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read more!
Thank you so much! You should check out Monster Truck. I think you will like it too.
Wowww!!! I'm so glad I found your publication! I enjoyed this a lot. Can't wait to read and listen to more of your work.
appreciate that a ton.
“Understanding the value of BEEF. Win or lose.” *mic drop*
Thank you Taylor. Wishing you the best in 2025.
Great read, gripping and raw. Really enjoyed the duo audio and reading format. Adds to the experience. Looking forward to reading more of these.
Thank you Laura! Wishing you the best in 2025.
Great read, keep em coming!
Thank you Selom. Wishing you the best in 2025.